个人陈述中最令招生官反感的“套路”大全

据英国《电讯报》4月21日湖南出国工作网，英国大学学院招生服务中心(Ucas)负责人表示学生在个人陈述中所用的“陈词滥调”会损害其未来的职业发展。

Ucas数据显示，“从小我一直是……”(From a young age I have always been...)是去年申请者最常用的开头。70万学生中有超过1,779名学生在个人陈述中喜欢用“最感兴趣的是”(interested in)或“被…所吸引”(fascinated by)结尾。

出国打工顾问梳理了个人陈述中被人用烂的句子，各位准备写申请的童鞋可要留心哟!

1. “自打记事起，我就……”(For as long as I can remember I have...)

2. “我申请这个课程是因为……”(I am applying for this course because...)

3. “我一直对…感兴趣”(I have always been interested in...)

4. “在我一生当中，我一直很享受…”(Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed...)

5. “回顾我的教育经历，我……”(Reflecting on my educational experiences...)

6. “护理专业是一门十分具有挑战性的……”(Nursing is a very challenging and demanding [career/profession/course)

7. “在学术上，我一直是……”(Academically, I have always been...)

8. “我一直想从事…职业”(I have always wanted to pursue a career in...)

9. “我一直对…充满热情”(I have always been passionate about...)

10. “教育是充满力量的武器，你可以用它来改变世界。”(Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.)

Ucas首席执行官Mary Curnock Cook表示，个人陈述一定要个人化。“学会介绍自己在求职面试中是一项很重要的技能，用那些陈词滥调无法让你的才能凸显。”